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Friday, November 9, 2012

More NaNo Words from WIP



Here's a scene I finished today. I post it here just as it came from my brain, i.e., rough and unedited. These are only first-draft words meaning there is still much work that needs to be done before they will be even close to ready for publication, including, of course, choosing names for my characters!

In F’s entourage was a cook. E was from the valley famous for its vintage grapes and grain-fed calves. It was unusual to find a man in the kitchen, but he was very competent with knife and herb H had to admit. He brought his own utensils and packets of seasonings as well as an ample supply of wines from his home village. Whether this was for cooking or drinking it was hard to tell as he quite liberally used the vintage for both uses.
“He be spending most evenings sleeping it off after the meal is served,” H muttered, “leaving the clean up to the rest of us.”
B and I were finishing an inventory of the pantry, preparing to make a shopping list for the next days' meals. I studied E covertly as I watched him slice and dice the vegetables on the chopping table before him. His knife was a blur — when he was not sipping out of the wooden cup he had on the table before him. I wondered if he might lose a finger or two, if one might end up in our evening’s meal. His head wobbled as he scraped the vegetables onto a platter before adding them to the broth boiling briskly over the cooking fire. He was a heavyset man though not yet gone to fat, but I did not think that explained his wandering step.
H was muttering again. “We having some hoity-toity dish tonight,” she said. “My cooking is not good enough for that Lady F.”
I turned, surprised. “She has changed the menu?” I asked. B and I had worked out the menus carefully, wanting to set a table in the style F was used to and still manage our larder efficiently. This was the first I had heard of any changes.
“She came in earlier herself,” H said, “with them mushrooms.” She jerked her chin in the direction of the chopping table where E was briskly slicing pale brown mushrooms of a kind I had never seen before. “Said they were some special sort she had been craving and could he please cook her up a sauce of them.”
She is now the lady of the keep, I reminded myself, gnawing on my lower lip. So it is perfectly within her purview to change the menu. I looked at B uncertainly. She must have read the question in my eyes.
“For now,” she said, “we will continue as we always have. If Lady F wants to step into your shoes, she will let you know soon enough.”
We turned back to the shelves where we were counting crocks of flour and sugar and soon the savory smell of frying mushrooms wafted through the kitchen accompanied by the sizzle of the saute pan. I heard a glug from the wine jug followed by a splash and sizzle and wondered how much was going into the sauce and how much into the cook.
We had settled at the side table with our list, cups of H’s tart and sweet lemonade at our elbows when there came a howl of dismay from E’s end of the kitchen.
“Blasted creature has been in my sauce!” He was swatting at one of the kitchen cats which, enticed by the smell of the cooling mushroom sauce, had leaped onto the table and was lapping it up. E swung and missed once, but his second swing connected and sent the cat sailing off the table where it landed with a thud on its side on the floor.
I watched, puzzled, for I had never seen a cat land any way but on its feet. It was a tabby, grey and white striped with white front feet. It lay stunned a moment, then leaped to it feet, took one staggering step before its back end fell over again and it crumpled there on the floor, twitched and lay still.
“You killed it!” shrieked the kitchen maid and burst into tears. She had always been a kind-hearted sort.
“I never!” E protested. He stood looking down at the pitiful beast with dismay, wobbling slightly, blinking rather like he had just woken.
“You must a broken his back,” H declared.
I stooped by the little creature to stroke its fur but paused before I touched it.
“No, look,” I said, “around its mouth. It has been poisoned.” There was a froth around its mouth a pale brown color. I glanced at the pan of mushroom sauce still sitting on the table, then at E.
He had gone quite white, still blinking and blinking. He began to back away nervously from the table. The kitchen maid gave a little squeal then dashed out of his way. He came up against her stool and sat down upon it with a resounding thump.
“What kind of mushrooms are those?” B asked quietly.
“I— I truly do not know,” he stammered. He licked his lips nervously and his eyes flicked to the wine jug on the table. “I have never seen them before. Lady F brought them in. She said they were from her home valley — a favorite from her childhood—” His voice faltered.
“I do not think we will be serving those at his Lord’s table tonight,” B said. “Mandi, will you scrape those into the midden, please, and cover them thoroughly. In fact, you might find a boy to dig you a hole first. Then wash your hands before you come back inside.”
The kitchen maid left the kitchen holding the pan outstretched before her in trembling hands.
“You also, E,” B said. “Wash your hands. And we will want to scrub that chopping table and the knives.” She gazed at the body of the poor cat. “Send the pot boy out to stables if you would, H, for one of the lads to come in for this unfortunate creature.”
H moved to the outside door. B moved to the hallway door and I followed behind. She turned back into the room to study E who still sat on the stool, pale and trembling. He gazed back at her with wet large eyes. “No more will be said of this for now. I trust that you will see that nothing like this happens again.” He nodded once, jerkily, and we left the kitchen.

from current Work in Progress

Thursday, November 1, 2012

I've Pushed Off from the Starting Line




"Looking back on my life, it is quite easy for me to pinpoint the exact day, the exact hour that changed my life, turning it out of its comfortable bed and and setting it on the course that has brought me to where I am in my life now. That was the day my father brought his new wife into our household. I had been the lady of the keep for the last ten years, nominally at least, ever since my mother had died when I five years old, giving birth to my youngest brothers, the second set of twins in our family. They completed our family, making us a total of seven counting my three older brothers and my father. Seven seemed like a perfectly good number to me and I could not see why Father would want to change that.

Perhaps he felt my household management skills were not what they should be and he was most likely right about that. In reality, we had a marvelous housekeeper who kept the household humming along just as it ought. Mrs. B consulted me (when she could find me), but usually she could not and she just carried on with her business, confident I approved of everything she did. She knew I would be out in the fields or the forest with the boys, if they let me tag along, or out on my own if they would not. The out-of-doors was where I felt most at home, with dirt under my fingernails and twigs caught in my hair, rather than inventorying pantries, planning meals, or overseeing the scrubbing out of the rooms next to Father’s. Which, of course, is what I should have been doing the last few days, getting ready for the new wife. Instead I had been improving my rabbit-snaring skills, following our gamekeeper through the mists and the rain along the trap line, trying to be silently observant and definitely being attentive as he occasionally commented on a rabbit or a trap or the weather.

Father and the Lady F arrived in the late afternoon after the morning rains had stopped, the autumn sun slanting through the trees, lighting up the drops on the leaves of the trees so that the woods sparkled. Two wagons drawn by matching teams followed them. Father was astride his big black and she rode a glistening bay I did not recognize, just as the horses pulling the wagons were unfamiliar. They were all high quality, perky, well-fed, sure on their feet. The wagons, too, bespoke quality, painted with detailed scrolls and embellishments, piled high with goods under tightly fastened coverings.

I saw all this because, since we had received notice of their coming, we were all up on the battlements peering between the ___ to get our first glimpse of her. As Father dismounted, handing off the reins to the groom waiting to receive them, and turned to hand down his lady, we dashed for the steep stairs down to arrive in the hall to receive them, just as they came through the great front door. The servants were already lined up—Mrs B had seen to that—and we breathlessly took our places alongside them.

The hounds had left their warm spots on the hearth, where a fire had been built against autumn’s chill, and were winding around Father’s legs, begging for his attention. He greeted each with a word and a pat on the head and sent them back to the fireplace. Then he took his lady’s hand and brought her over to where we waited. My father eyed us narrowly, but only shook his head slightly, before proceeding to introduce us.

F was tall with a fine figure gowned in green brocade and auburn hair that peeked demurely from under her green hood. Her cheekbones were high, her mouth full, her eyes a snapping blue. She smiled genteelly and tipped her head to each of us in turn as Father spoke each of our names. G and older twins all bowed with grace. I was suddenly aware of my wind-tossed hair and felt heat on my cheeks. When it came my turn I dropped a deep curtsy as I had been taught. When I rose, she took my hand, trapping it in both of hers and caught my gaze with hers.

“I do hope we are going to be friends, Talitha,” she said. Her voice was a lovely contralto. “I would so hate to have to be your enemy.”

I was struck dumb. I became aware my mouth was open and closed it abruptly.

“Of course,” I finally managed. But I could not bring myself to actually say the words that I imagined she was waiting to hear, that we would be friends. She looked at me expectantly for a moment, then smiled again and moved on down the line to D. The twins bowed to her appropriately and greeted her properly. Then Father took her away to show her to her rooms and the rest of us withdrew to Father’s library, eager to discuss her before we were called to dinner.

The boys were eager to discuss. I found myself rather disconcerted. I curled up in my favorite chair, feet tucked under me and gazed across the room at the fire. G was leaning against the hearth, poking at it absentmindedly. “She’s quite handsome,” he was saying. The other boys were sprawled about on chairs or the floor. The hounds had followed us and they made quite nice backrests. The conversation washed over me and I heard none of it. I was reliving that moment in the great hall, the feel of F’s hands, the look in her eyes, hearing again her voice and her words. What did she mean? It had almost sounded like a threat. But who was I to her? No one at all. A fifteen-year-old girl who barely knew how to be a lady, who did not particularly like being a lady, having grown up surrounded by boys and men and liking the things that boys and men like and do—hounds, for instance, and hunting for another. I was nothing to her. Father had told us about F, about the strategic importance of her family and the lands and the connections they had, how marrying her would solidify the south and give us strength against the turmoil in the north. Surely I was imagining things. I was nothing to her.

I was to discover in time how very wrong I was."

from current Work in Progress

Monday, June 27, 2011

Monday Morning Notes

Notes from Pastor's sermon on June 26th: "He Must Increase, But I Must Decrease" - John 3: 22-34.

How do we live as Christians in a culture of self-promotion, a cult of self, a kind of idol worship?
  • How do we see ourselves?
  • How do we see Jesus?
  • How do we respond?
John the Baptist, the greatest man who ever lived according to Jesus himself, is our model.
  • John saw himself as the friend of the bridegroom or the best man - privileged, special to the bridegroom (Jesus) with a limited task, when his task is over (presenting the bride in Jewish tradition) he steps joyfully out of the way
  • John saw Jesus as above all, from heaven (everyone and everything else is from earth), speaking God's words, all things placed in his hands
  • John responded by saying, "He must increase, but I must decrease". Not an option, but a necessity because of who He is and who we are.

  • Do we see ourselves humbly and gratefully accepting God's gift of our place and task? Do we step aside?
  • Do we see Jesus as above all, on an entirely higher plane, as God's salvation for the world?
  • Do we respond with "he must increase, but I must decrease"? Do people see me first or Jesus first?
This is a daily, moment by moment affirmation.

Additional passages: Galatians 2:20 and Philippians 1:20-21.

Sunday, May 8, 2011

Wannabe.....

I have to say that the writing I am currently most proud of are the scenes I've managed to write on my novel-in-progress. The thought of an entire book is rather overwhelming, thus my work on it is in fits and starts. But when I finally do plant my seat in the chair, tear myself away from Facebook, Twitter, and “How to Write” blogs, and actually pound out some scenes, I am almost always surprised and pleased with the results. So, Wannabe Novelist, why aren’t you writing?

Wednesday, May 4, 2011

Harder Than You Think

When I first started writing intentionally for publication, I imagined I would be mainly a personal-experience essay writer. Easy right? No research. Just whip out a piece about how you feel about something that happened to you. Ack! NOT so easy! Hard! I did sell one or two. Turned one into a series of devotions that sold. You really really have to have something to say that people want to hear. How-to pieces or articles about the ancient Egyptian pharaohs might be easier……